Thursday 29 December 2011

A Surprise....

                   Sana was on the walk track at 6 o'clock in the evening as usual. She had been going there regularly. It was a usual day for her . With Music playing in her ears she started her rounds. She came across she met everyday. She as usual warmly greeted with a smile.

                   As she was nearly going to complete her third round, Nimit came from behind. She got irritated. He had tried to talk to her before but she pretended she didn't listen him calling. He said-" Can i talk to u for a minute?" She sighed and took her headphones out. her mind already traveling back to the day she last saw him. He was one of the persons she saw coming there regularly. One day he came and asked her if she would be his friend. She simply replied No. She never did friendship with a complete stranger. She even preferred not to talk to such people. He asked Why? She simply replied not interested. He still tried to talk but she ignored him. Then she went away home. She would see him everyday but ignored him at her best.
                   From that day till today , they never talked. Today he came to her and wanted to talk for a minute.She thought Whats big deal in a minute. Would deal if anything happens!. She sees in his direction. Yes. He said

Though I asked your name last time, forgot it.  
Sana.
Well I wanted to say sorry.
                
                    That was something not at all expected.
For?
Because I followed you home.
I'm really sorry.
                    
                    Now she was full of mixed feeling. She didn't knew what to answer. She was surprised- this was certainly nothing expected, was angry- for the fact he had followed her and was pleased- though she didn't knew about it , He told her the truth and said sorry. Before she can reply he was gone. She searched around, but there was no trace of him. She went back home with the same feelings and hoping  she gets something to say before tomorrow.
 
(P.S hey guys will soon write again till then bye n take care..)

14 comments:

  1. oooh I hope she sees him tmrw...
    such a cute post

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  2. @Red handed: thnks.. m glad u liked it. :D

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  3. Cool blog with a looooooooooooooong name...

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  4. @xyzandme : thnks .. I m really glad to know u like d blog. :D so if its long for u, u suggest something else ;)

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  5. no offense...but frank reaction.. men are from mars, and women are from venus :)

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  6. Oh damn! my comment on this particular post didnt show up!! =/

    Anyhow.. about this post..
    Was that guy a ghost? Aisa hi koi kaise aachanak gayab ho sakta hai? =/

    And about the name.. hey its your blog! I bet you will have a cool name in your mind!

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  7. @manan guju : I know.. n there's no offense as its sheer truth..

    @xyzandme : how wud I know.. I dont know how to know if the person is a ghost or wat? :D

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  8. @Rahul : Thnnks..u can follow me if u like d it..

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  9. yeah, because guys are dumb thinkers.. who stick to logic.. atleast i am.
    But then its this dumb species which do somethin stupid.. this explains why the guy, obviously not getting a "go ahead" signal from you.. still tried again.. to somehow convey he is a decent guy.
    sometimes our stupidities work in our favor after all:)

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  10. @manam gujju: Exactly.. I think d same.. but I guess u took as its my story..

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  11. Wow! :) Great post! I love the story here! :) And your new template was so cool! :) I'm sorry if I was a bit late to comment and visit! But you know am so happy to see your post again! :)

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  12. yeah, my bad..i did take that as your story.. but if you look carefully i was payin you a compliment:) "u write so convincingly well its hard to believe that you experienced it third person":P
    but anyway,the bottomline still stays the same, doesnt it? the odds of impulsive stupidities succeeding are a good match for repulsive thought-out plans!

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  13. @Sagittarian: Its not late.. its never late. U can comment anytime u want till i post next because then u wud never know about it.. i m really happy knowing u have bin waiting ..:D


    @manan gujju : :D thanks for d compliment n it makes me happy to know my tries to convince people by write is getting succesful..
    N i wud try to convince u n all again in next post.. I wish u could remember to visit again..

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